Ok I have watched it and subscribed.
I personally would have removed all the first part and started from the cross and removed most of the last bit.
I have found that viewers skip through videos and aren't interested in the boring bits of track or me rabbiting on.
And find out what's causing that clicking sound.
I get well pissed off if my videos have unwanted noises in them as they take some editing out.
It's a massive leaning curve trying to get the videos edited and looking good
I personally would have removed all the first part and started from the cross and removed most of the last bit.
I have found that viewers skip through videos and aren't interested in the boring bits of track or me rabbiting on.
And find out what's causing that clicking sound.
I get well pissed off if my videos have unwanted noises in them as they take some editing out.
It's a massive leaning curve trying to get the videos edited and looking good